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Writing Task 1

Cam 20 TASK 1 (MAPS): BEECHWOOD FARM

The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today.


Sample answer

The provided plans compare Beechwood Farm in 1950 and its redevelopment today.

Overall, the farm has undergone considerable transformations, transitioning from being primarily utilised for agricultural purposes to a multi-functional premise serving farming endeavours, outdoor recreational pursuits, and retail activities. Additionally, the farm has also seen increased space utilisation, improved accessibility, and the adoption of renewable energy sources, alongside the addition and relocation of certain areas.

Regarding road infrastructure and landscaping, the main road running from west to north and the river covering the southern part of the farm have remained largely intact in terms of appearance and position. The most notable alteration has been the upgrade of the track in 1950 into a road, suggesting growing commuting demands within the farming premise.

In the northern part of Beechwood Farm, the area previously used for herding sheep was replaced with two newly-developed sites. Within these sites, on the left, a camping field equipped with tents and newly-planted trees emerged, potentially catering to local residents and outside campers. To the right of the camp site, an area filled with solar panels has been developed, indicating the adoption of clean energy use within the complex. Also, there is now a parking facility to the south of the installed solar panels.

The southern part of the agricultural land saw certain additions and repositionings. While the planting areas for fruit-bearing trees, soft fruits, and vegetables stayed unchanged, a farm retail outlet was built within the fruit-trees cultivation zone and a barn has been added when the two minor roads intersected. In the southeastern region, the former barn was replaced with new holiday cottages, whereas the farmhouse and a specialised area for chickens were unaltered.

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The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today.


Sample answer

The provided plans compare Beechwood Farm in 1950 and its redevelopment today.

Overall, the farm has undergone considerable transformations, transitioning from being primarily utilised for agricultural purposes to a multi-functional premise serving farming endeavours, outdoor recreational pursuits, and retail activities. Additionally, the farm has also seen increased space utilisation, improved accessibility, and the adoption of renewable energy sources, alongside the addition and relocation of certain areas.

Regarding road infrastructure and landscaping, the main road running from west to north and the river covering the southern part of the farm have remained largely intact in terms of appearance and position. The most notable alteration has been the upgrade of the track in 1950 into a road, suggesting growing commuting demands within the farming premise.

In the northern part of Beechwood Farm, the area previously used for herding sheep was replaced with two newly-developed sites. Within these sites, on the left, a camping field equipped with tents and newly-planted trees emerged, potentially catering to local residents and outside campers. To the right of the camp site, an area filled with solar panels has been developed, indicating the adoption of clean energy use within the complex. Also, there is now a parking facility to the south of the installed solar panels.

The southern part of the agricultural land saw certain additions and repositionings. While the planting areas for fruit-bearing trees, soft fruits, and vegetables stayed unchanged, a farm retail outlet was built within the fruit-trees cultivation zone near the road and a barn has been added when the two minor roads intersected. In the southeastern region, the former barn was replaced with new holiday cottages, whereas the farmhouse and a specialised area for chickens were unaltered.

Vocabulary

  1. Redevelopment – tái phát triển
  2. Considerable transformations – những thay đổi đáng kể
  3. Multi-functional premise – khu vực đa chức năng
  4. Farming endeavours – hoạt động nông nghiệp
  5. Recreational pursuits – hoạt động giải trí
  6. Retail activities – hoạt động bán lẻ
  7. Space utilisation – sử dụng không gian
  8. Adoption of renewable energy sources – áp dụng nguồn năng lượng tái tạo
  9. Relocation – di dời
  10. Intact – còn nguyên vẹn
  11. Upgrade – nâng cấp
  12. Commuting demands – nhu cầu đi lại
  13. Solar panels – tấm năng lượng mặt trời
  14. Adoption of clean energy use – áp dụng sử dụng năng lượng sạch
  15. Retail outlet – cửa hàng bán lẻ

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