Map of a park
The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now.
The map details alterations to a given park from today compared to 1980.
From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there has been increased accessibility to the park, which now has more amenities related to dining and entertainment for park-goers. However, there has been a reduction in overall green space.
In 1980, the major green space of the park was comprised of a triangle-shaped section dedicated to trees at the top right and a largely square section for planting flowers at the bottom right, both located on an L-shaped area that looks like a pavement. Those visiting the park could access it from two gates and there was a pond on the left side surrounded by benches and flowers.
Today, the park has undergone significant upgrades geared towards utility, as the inner roads were revamped to encompass 3 distinct areas. Firstly, where there were only trees, there is now a tree-surrounded barbecue area accompanied by desks and chairs. Secondly, the smaller flower-planting section has been converted into a bush, while the playground has replaced the larger flower area. The pond also saw a slight displacement to the right with an increased number of benches for park visitors. Finally, today’s park allows for entrances in all 4 directions.
Essay breakdown
Introduction:
[1] The map details alterations to a given park from today compared to 1980.
[2] From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there has been increased accessibility to the park, which now has more amenities related to dining and entertainment for park-goers. [3] However, there has been a reduction in overall green space.
[1] Write a general statement to introduce the topic of the essay.
[2] + [3] Write a clear overview to describe the changes in the park.
Body 1:
[1] In 1980, the major green space of the park was comprised of a triangle-shaped section dedicated to trees at the top right and a largely square section for planting flowers at the bottom right, both located on an L-shaped area that looks like a pavement. [2] Those visiting the park could access it from two gates and there was a pond on the left side surrounded by benches and flowers.
[1] Describes the major green space in the park in 1980, including its layout and features.
[2] Provide more details of the park in 1980.
Body 2:
[1] Today, the park has undergone significant upgrades geared towards utility, as the inner roads were revamped to encompass 3 distinct areas. [2] Firstly, where there were only trees, there is now a tree-surrounded barbecue area accompanied by desks and chairs. [3] Secondly, the smaller flower-planting section has been converted into a bush, while the playground has replaced the larger flower area. [4] The pond also saw a slight displacement to the right with an increased number of benches for park visitors. [5] Finally, today’s park allows for entrances in all 4 directions.
[1] Describes the significant upgrades that have been made to the park in 3 distinct areas.
[2] Describe the first area, a BBQ area with desks and chairs
[3] Describe the second area, a bush
[4] Describe the third area, the slight displacement of the pond and addition of more benches
[5] Mentions that the park now allows for entrances in all 4 directions.
Vocabulary:
The map details alterations to a given park from today compared to 1980.
From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there has been increased accessibility to the park, which now has more amenities related to dining and entertainment for park-goers. However, there has been a reduction in overall green space.
In 1980, the major green space of the park was comprised of a triangle-shaped section dedicated to trees at the top right and a largely square section for planting flowers at the bottom right, both located on an L-shaped area that looks like a pavement. Those visiting the park could access it from two gates and there was a pond on the left side surrounded by benches and flowers.
Today, the park has undergone significant upgrades geared towards utility, as the inner roads were revamped to encompass 3 distinct areas. Firstly, where there were only trees, there is now a tree-surrounded barbecue area accompanied by desks and chairs. Secondly, the smaller flower-planting section has been converted into a bush, while the playground has replaced the larger flower area. The pond also saw a slight displacement to the right with an increased number of benches for park visitors. Finally, today’s park allows for entrances in all 4 directions.
- Alterations: changes made to something.
- Accessibility: the ease of being able to reach or enter a place.
- Amenities: facilities or services provided for the convenience of people.
- Green space: an area of land that is covered with grass, trees, and other vegetation.
- Comprised of: made up of.
- Dedicated to: intended for a specific purpose or use.
- Upgrades: improvements or changes made to something to make it better or more advanced.
- Geared towards: directed or focused towards a particular purpose or goal.
- Utility: the state of being useful or practical.
- Revamped: improved or renovated.
- Distinct areas: separate and distinct sections or parts.
- Barbecue area: an area designated for cooking and eating food outdoors.
- Converted: changed in form or function.
- Displacement: the act of moving or transferring something to a different location.
- Entrances: a way or place to enter a building or space.
Grammar Gems:
COLLOCATION
“The park has undergone significant upgrades geared towards utility”
This sentence uses the phrase “geared towards” which is a collocation, meaning to direct or focus towards a particular purpose or goal. In this sentence, the upgrades made to the park are meant to serve a practical or useful purpose.
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