Writing Task 1

TASK 1 (Maps): Evacuation plan

Sample Answer

The provided diagram illustrates a fire evacuation plan in a college housing accommodation.


Overall, there are, in total, seven bedrooms, from which students can follow the instructed guidelines given by the in-charge personnel to evacuate promptly and safely towards two designated meeting locations. Once at the required congregating areas, students can then follow the provided emergency staircases to escape from the building in a safe manner.

Looking initially at the evacuation pathway that guides towards meeting point 1, this designated assembly point can be promptly accessed by students residing in these accommodation units: Bedroom 1 (located in the northwestern corner), Bedroom 2 (situated to the east of Bedroom 1), and Bedroom 3 (positioned opposite Bedroom 2 on the south side of the plan). In cases of a fire emergency, students are required to leave their bedrooms, move straight to the corridor, and follow directions to congregate at meeting point 1 before descending/ascending the stairs to safety.

Turning to the remaining evacuation route pointing to meeting point 2, this designated safety assembly point mostly facilitates the nearby bedrooms, namely Bedroom 4 (in the northeastern corner of the plan), Bedroom 5 (immediately to the south of Bedroom 4), Bedroom 6 (positioned in the southeastern corner area), and finally Bedroom 7 (immediately to the west of Bedroom 6). Similarly, students are instructed to leave their bedrooms, go to the corridor, then circumvent the lift located to the northeast of the building before eventually finding the stairs. Students can then go downstairs and congregate at meeting point 2 for further safety instructions.

TỪ VỰNG HAY

The provided diagram illustrates a fire evacuation plan in a college housing accommodation.


Overall, there are, in total, seven bedrooms, from which students can follow the instructed guidelines given by the in-charge personnel to evacuate promptly and safely towards two designated meeting locations. Once at the required congregating areas, students can then follow the provided emergency staircases to escape from the building in a safe manner.

Looking initially at the evacuation pathway that guides towards meeting point 1, this designated assembly point can be promptly accessed by students residing in these accommodation units: Bedroom 1 (located in the northwestern corner), Bedroom 2 (situated to the east of Bedroom 1), and Bedroom 3 (positioned opposite Bedroom 2 on the south side of the plan). In cases of a fire emergency, students are required to leave their bedrooms, move straight to the corridor, and follow directions to congregate at meeting point 1 before descending/ascending the stairs to safety.

Turning to the remaining evacuation route pointing to meeting point 2, this designated safety assembly point mostly facilitates the nearby bedrooms, namely Bedroom 4 (in the northeastern corner of the plan), Bedroom 5 (immediately to the south of Bedroom 4), Bedroom 6 (positioned in the southeastern corner area), and finally Bedroom 7 (immediately to the west of Bedroom 6). Similarly, students are instructed to leave their bedrooms, go to the corridor, then circumvent the lift located to the northeast of the building before eventually finding the stairs. Students can then go downstairs and congregate at meeting point 2 for further safety instructions.

Vocabulary

  1. illustrates – minh họa
  2. fire evacuation plan – sơ đồ thoát hiểm cháy
  3. college housing accommodation – khu nhà ở sinh viên
  4. Overall – nhìn chung
  5. follow the instructed guidelines – tuân theo hướng dẫn được chỉ định
  6. in-charge personnel – người phụ trách
  7. evacuate promptly and safely – sơ tán nhanh chóng và an toàn
  8. two designated meeting locations – hai địa điểm tập trung được chỉ định
  9. required congregating areas – khu vực tập trung bắt buộc
  10. provided emergency staircases – cầu thang thoát hiểm được cung cấp
  11. escape from the building in a safe manner – thoát khỏi tòa nhà một cách an toàn
  12. Looking initially at – nhìn trước hết vào
  13. evacuation pathway – lối thoát hiểm
  14. designated assembly point – điểm tập trung được chỉ định
  15. promptly accessed – tiếp cận nhanh chóng
  16. residing in – cư trú tại
  17. accommodation units – các khu phòng ở
  18. cases of a fire emergency – trường hợp khẩn cấp cháy nổ
  19. follow directions to congregate – theo hướng dẫn để tập trung
  20. descending/ascending the stairs to safety – đi xuống/lên cầu thang để đến nơi an toàn
  21. Turning to – chuyển sang
  22. remaining evacuation route – lối thoát hiểm còn lại
  23. facilitates the nearby bedrooms – phục vụ các phòng gần đó
  24. circumvent the lift – đi vòng qua thang máy
  25. further safety instructions – hướng dẫn an toàn bổ sung

Tóm tắt cấu trúc:

1. Introduction – Giới thiệu

  • The provided diagram illustrates / minh họa a fire evacuation plan in a college housing accommodation.
  • Cấu trúc quan trọng: The provided diagram illustrates… → mở bài Task 1 luôn, paraphrase từ đề.

2. Overview – Tổng quan

  • Overall, there are seven bedrooms, from which students can follow the instructed guidelines to evacuate promptly and safely.
  • Key point: Overall → nêu tổng quan, tránh liệt kê chi tiết.

3. Group / Body Paragraphs – Nhóm thông tin chi tiết

a) Group 1 – Meeting Point 1

  • Looking initially at the evacuation pathway to meeting point 1, this designated assembly point is promptly accessed by students residing in: Bedroom 1, 2, 3.
  • Action / hướng dẫn: students are required to leave their bedrooms, move straight to the corridor, and follow directions to congregate at meeting point 1.
  • Cấu trúc quan trọng:
    • Looking initially at… → bắt đầu mô tả một nhóm thông tin / một phần diagram
    • students are required to… → nêu hành động
    • residing in… → dùng để nhóm các đối tượng (bedrooms)

b) Group 2 – Meeting Point 2

  • Turning to the remaining evacuation route to meeting point 2, this designated safety assembly point facilitates the nearby bedrooms: Bedroom 4, 5, 6, 7.
  • Action / hướng dẫn: students are instructed to leave their bedrooms, go to the corridor, circumvent the lift, then descend the stairs to safety.
  • Cấu trúc quan trọng:
    • Turning to… → bắt đầu nhóm thông tin tiếp theo
    • facilitates the nearby… → mô tả vùng / nhóm được phục vụ
    • circumvent the lift → dùng để diễn tả hướng di chuyển hoặc hành động đặc biệt

4. Safety / Conclusion Phrase – Câu kết / nhấn mạnh an toàn

  • Students can then congregate at meeting point X for further safety instructions.
  • Cấu trúc nhấn mạnh kết quả / mục đích: for further safety instructions → Task 1 thường cần nhấn mạnh kết quả / hành động cuối cùng.

Tips

  1. Nhóm thông tin theo location hoặc action: Meeting Point 1 vs Meeting Point 2.
  2. Dùng các cấu trúc bắt đầu nhóm:
    • Looking initially at… → nhóm 1
    • Turning to… → nhóm 2
  3. Dùng passive / instructed structures:
    • students are required / instructed to… → diễn tả hành động bắt buộc
  4. Paraphrase từ đề:
    • illustrates / shows / depicts
    • college housing accommodation / student housing units
  5. Highlight kết quả / mục đích cuối: to safety, for further safety instructions.

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