Writing Task 1

TASK 1 (MIXED CHARTS): UNIVERSITY ENROLMENT

The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012.

Sample Answer

The combined line graph and bar chart illustrate the number of students enrolling in six different disciplines at a particular university in 2012, categorized by gender, alongside the total figures for each subject.

Overall, Social Sciences was the most popular discipline, followed distantly by Health, Humanities, and STEM modules (Engineering and Science & Mathematics), with Agriculture trailing behind in terms of enrolment. Additionally, female students outnumbered their male counterparts in Social Sciences, Health, and Humanities, while the reverse was true for Engineering and Science & Mathematics. Agriculture was the only discipline with equal enrolment rates for both genders.

Looking first at subjects with higher female enrolment, Social Sciences registered the greatest number of students, at 7,000. Within this total, more than half (4,000 students) were female, moderately surpassing the figure for males, which stood at just below 3,000. Meanwhile, the total enrolment for Social Sciences was also more than triple that of Health and Humanities, both of which recorded just above 2,000 students. A closer breakdown reveals that females outnumbered males by roughly 2:1, with the most striking disparity seen in Health, where around 1,800 females were enrolled compared with approximately 800 males.

Turning to subjects with higher male enrolment, Engineering ranked as the second most popular discipline, although its registration figure was less than half that of Social Sciences, at 3,000 students. In this category, males significantly outnumbered females, with 2,200 versus 1,000 students. A similar pattern was observed in Science and Mathematics, where the male-to-female ratio was about 2:1, with figures of roughly 1,200 and 900 respectively.

Lastly, Agriculture was the only discipline with equal numbers of male and female students, both standing at around 250, resulting in the lowest total enrolment of about 500, which highlights the subject’s low popularity within the curriculum.

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The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012.

The combined line graph and bar chart illustrate the number of students enrolling in six different disciplines in a particular university in 2012, categorised by gender, alongside the total figures for each subject.

Overall, the subject of Social Sciences was the most registered one, followed distantly by Health, Humanities, and STEM modules (Engineering, and Science & Mathematics), with Agriculture trailing behind in terms of enrolment rate. Additionally, female students outnumber their male counterparts in Social Sciences , Health, and Humanities, while the reverse was true for Engineering and Science & Mathematics. Agriculture was the only discipline with equal enrolment rates for both genders.

Looking first at subjects with higher female enrolment, Social Sciences registered the greatest number of students, at 7,000. Within this total, more than half (4,000 students) were female, moderately surpassing the figure for males, which stood at just below 3,000. Meanwhile, the total enrolment for Social Sciences was also more than triple that of Health and Humanities, both of which recorded just above 2,000 students. A closer breakdown reveals that females outnumbered males, by roughly 2:1, with the most striking disparity seen in Health, where around 1,800 females were enrolled compared with approximately 800 males.

Turning to subjects with higher male enrolment, Engineering ranked as the second most popular discipline, although its registration figure was less than half that of Social Sciences, at 3,000 students. In this category, males significantly outnumbered females, with 2,200 versus 1,000 students. A similar pattern was observed in Science and Mathematics, where the male-to-female ratio was about 2:1, with figures of roughly 1,200 and 900 respectively.

Lastly, Agriculture was the only discipline with equal numbers of male and female students, both standing at around 250, resulting in the lowest total enrolment, of about 500, which highlights the subject’s low popularity within the curriculum.

Vocabulary

  1. counterparts in Social Sciences – đối tác / đối tượng tương ứng trong Khoa học Xã hội
  2. the reverse was true – điều ngược lại đúng
  3. the only discipline with equal enrolment rates – ngành duy nhất có tỷ lệ tuyển sinh cân bằng
  4. higher female enrolment – tỷ lệ tuyển sinh nữ cao hơn
  5. registered the greatest number of students – ghi nhận số lượng sinh viên cao nhất
  6. moderately surpassing the figure for males – vượt qua con số của nam một cách vừa phải
  7. total enrolment for Social Sciences – tổng số lượng tuyển sinh của Khoa học Xã hội
  8. more than triple that of Health and Humanities – gấp hơn ba lần so với Y tế và Nhân văn
  9. closer breakdown reveals that females outnumbered males – phân tích chi tiết cho thấy nữ nhiều hơn nam
  10. most striking disparity seen in Health – sự chênh lệch rõ rệt nhất thấy ở Y tế
  11. higher male enrolment – tỷ lệ tuyển sinh nam cao hơn
  12. ranked as the second most popular discipline – được xếp hạng là ngành phổ biến thứ hai
  13. registration figure was less than half that of Social Sciences – con số đăng ký ít hơn một nửa so với Khoa học Xã hội
  14. male-to-female ratio was about 2:1 – tỷ lệ nam so với nữ khoảng 2:1
  15. highlights the subject’s low popularity within the curriculum – làm nổi bật sự ít phổ biến của môn học trong chương trình

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