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Writing Task 2

Nuclear Weapons

Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the weaponization of nuclear energies would, by and large, exert positive impacts on the world. From my perspective, though history is rife with deadly mass devastations caused by the abuse of nuclear weapons as a means for destructive ends, the adoption of nuclear arms only in extreme cases for defense, coupled with the proper exploitation of the underlying technology, would greatly benefit the world. 

Detractors of nuclear-energy-based weapons ground their arguments on multiple catastrophic events in the past. Throughout history, nuclear weapons, such as nuclear bombs and nuclear firearms detonated from military airplanes, have mostly been associated with millions of lives lost, devastating destruction to the attacked countries’ infrastructure, and even potential bodily deformations for generations. Examples of nuclear-weapon-caused catastrophes abound, but the most salient one was none other than the bombing of Nagasaki, Japan in World War II. The result of this event shocked the world with outrageous numbers of human casualties and infrastructure wreckage. Events of such magnitude set countries back decades economically, leaving behind anguished suffering and resentment. 

The above justification is valid, however, the enormous potential of the underlying technology behind nuclear weapons has largely been overlooked, which could revolutionize the global energy scene with proper regulation. Many longitudinal scientific studies in the field of quantum physics have conclusively pointed out the overwhelming amount of energy that could be produced if a nuclear generator, such as an arc reactor, was successfully fabricated. The energy generated from such an operation could provide a nearly limitless supply of energy to not only power all industries but also provide mankind with sustainable sources, reducing the reliance on fossil fuels. This technology, though currently in development, has enormous potential. Moreover, only by relegating the weaponization of nuclear technologies to defense purposes in extreme cases should the safety of our society be safeguarded. Unless the destructive nature of this type of weapon is carefully scrutinized, the prospect of world wars and future instabilities will be of concern. 

In conclusion, despite historical evidence related to mass destruction and human loss, I concede that the potential of nuclear weapons, given the ethical exploitation of its technology and regulation, would contribute to benefiting the world as a whole. Governments should work in tandem to carry out research to capitalize on the potential of nuclear energy.


Essay Breakdown

Structure

Introduction

[1] It is believed that the weaponization of nuclear energies would, by and large, exert positive impacts on the world. [2] From my perspective, though history is rife with deadly mass devastations caused by the abuse of nuclear weapons as a means for destructive ends, the adoption of nuclear arms only in extreme cases for defense, coupled with the proper exploitation of the underlying technology, would greatly benefit the world. 

1. Paraphrase the topic, and introduce the belief that the weaponisation of nuclear energy would have mostly positive impacts on the world

2. A clear opinion stating my perspective that the use of nuclear weapons for defense and proper exploitation of the underlying technology would benefit the world

Body

Paragraph 1

[1] Detractors of nuclear-energy-based weapons ground their arguments on multiple catastrophic events in the past. [2] Throughout history, nuclear weapons, such as nuclear bombs and nuclear firearms detonated from military airplanes, have mostly been associated with millions of lives lost, devastating destruction to the attacked countries’ infrastructure, and even potential bodily deformations for generations. [3] Examples of nuclear-weapon-caused catastrophes abound, but the most salient one was none other than the bombing of Nagasaki, Japan in World War II. [4] The result of this event shocked the world with outrageous numbers of human casualties and infrastructure wreckage. [5] Events of such magnitude set countries back decades economically, leaving behind anguished suffering and resentment. 

1. A topic sentence introducing the arguments against nuclear weapons

2. Develop a topic sentence by stating the catastrophes associated with nuclear weapons

3. Provide an example of the bombing of Nagasaki 

4. Develop the example by describing the impact of the event that shocked the world

5. Keep developing and providing the results of such destructions

Paragraph 2

[1] The above justification is valid, however, the enormous potential of the underlying technology behind nuclear weapons has largely been overlooked, which could revolutionize the global energy scene with proper regulation. [2] Many longitudinal scientific studies in the field of quantum physics have conclusively pointed out the overwhelming amount of energy that could be produced if a nuclear generator, such as an arc reactor, was successfully fabricated. [3] The energy generated from such an operation could provide a nearly limitless supply of energy to not only power all industries but also provide mankind with sustainable sources, reducing the reliance on fossil fuels. [4] This technology, though currently in development, has enormous potential. [5] Moreover, only by relegating the weaponization of nuclear technologies to defense purposes in extreme cases should the safety of our society be safeguarded. [6] Unless the destructive nature of this type of weapon is carefully scrutinized, the prospect of world wars and future instabilities will be of concern. 

1. A topic sentence showing the main idea – acknowledging the validity of the above justification, but also pointing out the potential of the technology behind nuclear weapons

2. Explain the topic sentence by providing examples from scientific studies in quantum physics

3. Develop the idea as to the potential of nuclear energy

4. Conclusion on the potential of the underlying technology

5. Introduce another supporting idea, suggesting that the weaponisation of nuclear technologies should be limited to defense purposes in extreme cases only

6. A warning that without careful scrutiny, there is a concern about future wars and instabilities

Conclusion

[1] In conclusion, despite historical evidence related to mass destruction and human loss, I concede that the potential of nuclear weapons, given the ethical exploitation of its technology and regulation, would contribute to benefiting the world as a whole. [2] Governments should work in tandem to carry out research to capitalize on the potential of nuclear energy.

1. Restate my opinion

2. Extend the viewpoint by stating a final thought

Vocabulary

It is believed that the weaponization of nuclear energies would, by and large, exert positive impacts on the world. From my perspective, though history is rife with deadly mass devastations caused by the abuse of nuclear weapons as a means for destructive ends, the adoption of nuclear arms only in extreme cases for defense, coupled with the proper exploitation of the underlying technology, would greatly benefit the world. 

Detractors of nuclear-energy-based weapons ground their arguments on multiple catastrophic events in the past. Throughout history, nuclear weapons, such as nuclear bombs and nuclear firearms detonated from military airplanes, have mostly been associated with millions of lives lost, devastating destruction to the attacked countries’ infrastructure, and even potential bodily deformations for generations. Examples of nuclear-weapon-caused catastrophes abound, but the most salient one was none other than the bombing of Nagasaki, Japan in World War II. The result of this event shocked the world with outrageous numbers of human casualties and infrastructure wreckage. Events of such magnitude set countries back decades economically, leaving behind anguished suffering and resentment

The above justification is valid, however, the enormous potential of the underlying technology behind nuclear weapons has largely been overlooked, which could revolutionize the global energy scene with proper regulation. Many longitudinal scientific studies in the field of quantum physics have conclusively pointed out the overwhelming amount of energy that could be produced if a nuclear generator, such as an arc reactor, was successfully fabricated. The energy generated from such an operation could provide a nearly limitless supply of energy to not only power all industries but also provide mankind with sustainable sources, reducing the reliance on fossil fuels. This technology, though currently in development, has enormous potential. Moreover, only by relegating the weaponization of nuclear technologies to defense purposes in extreme cases should the safety of our society be safeguarded. Unless the destructive nature of this type of weapon is carefully scrutinized, the prospect of world wars and future instabilities will be of concern. 

In conclusion, despite historical evidence related to mass destruction and human loss, I concede that the potential of nuclear weapons, given the ethical exploitation of its technology and regulation, would contribute to benefiting the world as a whole. Governments should work in tandem to carry out research to capitalize on the potential of nuclear energy.

  • weaponisation of nuclear energies: the process of developing and using nuclear energy for military purposes. 
  • deadly mass devastations: large-scale destruction resulting in many deaths. 
  • abuse of nuclear weapons: using nuclear weapons in a harmful or destructive way.
  • adoption of nuclear arms: the process of obtaining and using nuclear weapons. 
  • underlying technology: the basic principles and methods used in a particular field or activity. 
  • detractors: people who criticize or oppose something. 
  • nuclear-energy-based weapons: weapons that use nuclear energy as their source of power. catastrophic events: extremely serious and harmful events. 
  • nuclear weapons: weapons that use nuclear reactions to release energy. 
  • millions of lives lost: a large number of deaths. 
  • devastating destruction: severe damage to an area or community. 
  • bodily deformations: physical abnormalities or disfigurements. 
  • salient one: the most notable or important one. 
  • outrageous numbers: extremely large numbers. 
  • infrastructure wreckage: severe damage to the basic structures and systems of a country or community. 
  • set countries back: caused a country to regress or fall behind in development. 
  • anguished suffering: intense emotional distress. 
  • resentment: bitterness or anger towards someone or something. 
  • enormous potential: extremely large or great potential. 
  • underlying technology behind nuclear weapons: the basic principles and methods used in the development of nuclear weapons. 
  • revolutionize the global energy scene: greatly change and improve the global energy industry. 
  • proper regulation: appropriate and effective control or management. 
  • longitudinal scientific studies: research conducted over a long period of time. 
  • quantum physics: a branch of physics that deals with the behavior of matter and energy at the atomic and subatomic levels. 
  • overwhelming amount of energy: a very large quantity of energy. 
  • nuclear generator: a device that generates electricity using nuclear energy. 
  • arc reactor: a type of nuclear generator that uses a strong magnetic field to contain plasma in order to produce energy. 
  • limitless supply of energy: an unlimited or almost unlimited amount of energy. 
  • power all industries: provide energy for all types of businesses or manufacturing. sustainable sources: sources of energy that can be replenished or used without running out. 
  • reducing the reliance on fossil fuels: decreasing the dependence on non-renewable energy sources. 
  • ethical exploitation: using a technology in a morally responsible and acceptable way. relegating: assign or restrict to a particular role or place. 
  • scrutinized: closely examined or investigated. 
  • prospect of world wars: the possibility of future global conflicts. 
  • future instabilities: potential future difficulties or disruptions. 
  • work in tandem: work together closely and effectively. 
  • carry out research: conduct research or investigations. 
  • capitalize on the potential: take advantage of the potential.

Grammar Gems: 

SUBJUNCTIVE MOOD

“The enormous potential of the underlying technology behind nuclear weapons has largely been overlooked, which could revolutionize the global energy scene with proper regulation. Many longitudinal scientific studies in the field of quantum physics have conclusively pointed out the overwhelming amount of energy that could be produced if a nuclear generator, such as an arc reactor, was successfully fabricated.”

This sentence uses complex grammar, specifically the use of the subjunctive mood “if a nuclear generator, such as an arc reactor, was successfully fabricated.” This type of clause is used to express conditions that are uncertain, hypothetical, or not yet realized. 

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