The South Pole
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South pole.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Untouched destinations, such as the South Pole, are now accessible to scientists and travelers worldwide. Despite the tangible benefits, I strongly believe that this development is, on the whole, negative.
Supporters of visits to isolated regions cite several benefits. Firstly, scientists can gain profound insights into natural habitats and their constituents that have yet to be discovered. For instance, research on endangered polar bears has led to timely conservation efforts, preventing their extinction. Additionally, trips to remote environments provide unforgettable memories for holidaymakers. For example, visitors to Antarctica can learn to adapt to negative temperatures and feed penguins on glaciers, resulting in a strong sense of satisfaction.
However, I believe that traveling into secluded territories has a host of drawbacks on the environment and individual well-being. The primary reason is that those who require medical assistance cannot be admitted to the nearest hospital due to the potential lack of infrastructure in these areas. Forest explorers, for example, run a high risk of encountering wild animals and getting severely injured without first aid equipment. Furthermore, many tourism business owners capitalize on untouched destinations by erecting tourist-friendly facilities at the expense of natural forests and water reserves. This results in the destruction of the original pristine habitats and the disappearance of many species of flora and fauna.
In conclusion, I believe that the health and ecological risks far outweigh any benefits related to personal enjoyment and knowledge gained. Therefore, the general public’s environmental awareness should be heightened to protect remote natural places.
Essay Breakdown
Structure
Introduction
[1] Untouched destinations, such as the South Pole, are now accessible to scientists and travelers worldwide. [2] Despite the tangible benefits [2.1], I strongly believe that this development is, on the whole, negative [2.2].
1. Paraphrase the given topic
2. Answer the question and state my clear stance
[2.1]: Concessive clause – my less preferred viewpoint: Main idea for Body 1
[2.2]: My preferred viewpoint: Main idea for Body 2
Body
Paragraph 1
[1] Supporters of visits to isolated regions cite several benefits. [2] Firstly, scientists can gain profound insights into natural habitats and their constituents that have yet to be discovered. [3] For instance, research on endangered polar bears has led to timely conservation efforts, preventing their extinction. [4] Additionally, trips to remote environments provide unforgettable memories for holidaymakers. [5] For example, visitors to Antarctica can learn to adapt to negative temperatures and feed penguins on glaciers, resulting in a strong sense of satisfaction.
1. A topic sentence showing the main idea: benefits
2. Supporting idea 1: Develop the main point with regard to scientists
3. Provide an example to further develop supporting idea 1
4. Supporting idea 2: Develop the main point with regard to tourists
5. Provide an example to further develop supporting idea 2
Paragraph 2
[1] However, I believe that traveling into secluded territories has a host of drawbacks on the environment and individual well-being. [2] The primary reason is that those who require medical assistance cannot be admitted to the nearest hospital due to the potential lack of infrastructure in these areas. [3] Forest explorers, for example, run a high risk of encountering wild animals and getting severely injured without first aid equipment. [4] Furthermore, many tourism business owners capitalize on untouched destinations by erecting tourist-friendly facilities at the expense of natural forests and water reserves. [5] This results in the destruction of the original pristine habitats and the disappearance of many species of flora and fauna.
1. A topic sentence expressing the main idea: drawbacks
2. Supporting idea 1: Develop the main point with regard to the lack of infrastructure
3. Provide an example to further develop supporting idea 1
4. Supporting idea 2: Develop the main point with regard to tourism
5. Keep developing supporting idea 2, stating the environmental consequences
Conclusion
[1] In conclusion, I believe that the health and ecological risks far outweigh any benefits related to personal enjoyment and knowledge gained. [2] Therefore, the general public’s environmental awareness should be heightened to protect remote natural places.
1. Restate my opinion: drawbacks > benefits
2. Extend the viewpoint by stating a final thought, in this case providing a viable solution
Vocabulary
Untouched destinations, such as the South Pole, are now accessible to scientists and travelers worldwide. Despite the tangible benefits, I strongly believe that this development is, on the whole, negative.
Supporters of visits to isolated regions cite several benefits. Firstly, scientists can gain profound insights into natural habitats and their constituents that have yet to be discovered. For instance, research on endangered polar bears has led to timely conservation efforts, preventing their extinction. Additionally, trips to remote environments provide unforgettable memories for holidaymakers. For example, visitors to Antarctica can learn to adapt to negative temperatures and feed penguins on glaciers, resulting in a strong sense of satisfaction.
However, I believe that traveling into secluded territories has a host of drawbacks on the environment and individual well-being. The primary reason is that those who require medical assistance cannot be admitted to the nearest hospital due to the potential lack of infrastructure in these areas. Forest explorers, for example, run a high risk of encountering wild animals and getting severely injured without first aid equipment. Furthermore, many tourism business owners capitalize on untouched destinations by erecting tourist-friendly facilities at the expense of natural forests and water reserves. This results in the destruction of the original pristine habitats and the disappearance of many species of flora and fauna.
In conclusion, I believe that the health and ecological risks far outweigh any benefits related to personal enjoyment and knowledge gained. Therefore, the general public’s environmental awareness should be heightened to protect remote natural places.
Vocabulary Highlight
- Untouched destinations: isolated regions that have not been impacted by human activity
- Tangible benefits: clear, measurable advantages
- Profound insights: deep understanding and knowledge gained
- Natural habitats and their constituents: the living organisms and their environment in an ecosystem
- Timely conservation efforts: conservation efforts that are implemented at the right moment to prevent extinction or further damage to an ecosystem
- Unforgettable memories: experiences that are memorable and cannot be forgotten easily
- Secluded territories: isolated regions that are difficult to access
- Individual well-being: the state of being healthy and happy
- Lack of infrastructure: absence or inadequacy of basic facilities and services necessary for the functioning of a community
- First aid equipment: medical supplies and equipment that are used for initial treatment of injuries
- Tourism business owners: individuals or companies that own or operate businesses related to tourism
- Tourist-friendly facilities: facilities or amenities that cater to the needs of tourists
- Pristine habitats: natural habitats that are in their original, undisturbed condition
- Flora and fauna: the plants and animals that exist in a particular environment or ecosystem
- Ecological risks: risks related to the environment and the natural world
- Personal enjoyment: enjoyment that is experienced by an individual
- Environmental awareness: knowledge and understanding of the environment and the impact of human activity on it.
Grammar Gems
INTRODUCTORY PHRASES, COMPOUND OBJECTS, AND PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES
“Additionally, trips to remote environments provide unforgettable memories for holidaymakers.”
This sentence uses a complex structure with an introductory adverbial phrase, “Additionally,” followed by a subject, “trips,” and a verb, “provide.” The subject is then followed by a compound direct object, “unforgettable memories for holidaymakers,” which includes an adjective and a prepositional phrase. The structure of the sentence can help learners understand how to use introductory phrases, compound objects, and prepositional phrases.
Reading
Further reading can be found here:
https://education.nationalgeographic.org/resource/south-pole/
Listening
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