Air Travel And Telecommunications
In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The 20th century has witnessed significant growth in air travel and telecommunications, leading to increased interaction among people from diverse parts of the world. This has raised the question of whether the benefits of this connectivity outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, the advantages of international cohesiveness brought about by these developments outweigh the risks of illicit activities and the spread of misinformation.
While air travel has facilitated the transportation of illegal goods, the benefits it provides far outweigh the drawbacks. The airline industry’s growth has enabled the delivery of essential supplies such as food and medical equipment to disaster-prone areas more efficiently than traditional means like private vehicles, trains, or trucks. Furthermore, budget airlines have opened up opportunities for travellers to explore faraway lands and learn about new cultures, which may have been impossible before.
Despite the immediacy of communication through telecommunications facilitating the spread of misinformation, the benefits of these developments are undeniable. Telecommunications have enabled people to stay updated with global events, creating a sense of global unity that strengthens and unites individuals, particularly during times of crisis. Additionally, the increased connectedness between different regions of the world has made it possible for people to come together globally, thereby promoting international cohesiveness.
In conclusion, the benefits of air travel and telecommunications in fostering global unity far outweigh their potential drawbacks. While it is essential to exercise caution in the dissemination of information and transportation of goods, people should embrace these developments fully and take advantage of the opportunities they provide in a modern, globalized world.
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Essay Breakdown
Structure
Introduction
[1] The 20th century has witnessed significant growth in air travel and telecommunications, leading to increased interaction among people from diverse parts of the world. [2] This has raised the question of whether the benefits of this connectivity outweigh the disadvantages. [3] In my opinion, the advantages of international cohesiveness brought about by these developments outweigh the risks of illicit activities and the spread of misinformation.
1. Paraphrase the topic, introduce the main idea
2. Leading to my opinion
3. A clear opinion stating my personal viewpoint that advantages (cohesiveness) > disadvantages (risks of illicit activities and the spread of misinformation)
Body
Paragraph 1
[1] While air travel has facilitated the transportation of illegal goods, the benefits it provides far outweigh the drawbacks. [2] The airline industry’s growth has enabled the delivery of essential supplies such as food and medical equipment to disaster-prone areas more efficiently than traditional means like private vehicles, trains, or trucks. [3] Furthermore, budget airlines have opened up opportunities for travellers to explore faraway lands and learn about new cultures, which may have been impossible before.
1. A topic sentence showing the main idea – air travel (benefits >> drawbacks)
2. Provide a supporting idea, explain and give examples for the 1st benefit of the airline industry – the delivery of essential supplies
3. Provide a supporting idea, explain and give examples for the 2nd benefit of the airline industry – travel and cultural learning
Paragraph 2
[1] Despite the immediacy of communication through telecommunications facilitating the spread of misinformation, the benefits of these developments are undeniable. [2] Telecommunications have enabled people to stay updated with global events, creating a sense of global unity that strengthens and unites individuals, particularly during times of crisis. [3] Additionally, the increased connectedness between different regions of the world has made it possible for people to come together globally, thereby promoting international cohesiveness.
1. A topic sentence showing the main idea – telecommunications (benefits >> drawbacks)
2. Provide a supporting idea, explain and give examples for the 1st benefit of telecommunications – staying updated
3. Provide a supporting idea, explain and give examples for the 1st benefit of telecommunications – people coming together
Conclusion
[1] In conclusion, the benefits of air travel and telecommunications in fostering global unity far outweigh their potential drawbacks. [2] While it is essential to exercise caution in the dissemination of information and transportation of goods, people should embrace these developments fully and take advantage of the opportunities they provide in a modern, globalized world.
1. Restate my opinion
2. Extend the viewpoint by stating a final thought
Vocabulary
The 20th century has witnessed significant growth in air travel and telecommunications, leading to increased interaction among people from diverse parts of the world. This has raised the question of whether the benefits of this connectivity outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, the advantages of international cohesiveness brought about by these developments outweigh the risks of illicit activities and the spread of misinformation.
While air travel has facilitated the transportation of illegal goods, the benefits it provides far outweigh the drawbacks. The airline industry’s growth has enabled the delivery of essential supplies such as food and medical equipment to disaster-prone areas more efficiently than traditional means like private vehicles, trains, or trucks. Furthermore, budget airlines have opened up opportunities for travellers to explore faraway lands and learn about new cultures, which may have been impossible before.
Despite the immediacy of communication through telecommunications facilitating the spread of misinformation, the benefits of these developments are undeniable. Telecommunications have enabled people to stay updated with global events, creating a sense of global unity that strengthens and unites individuals, particularly during times of crisis. Additionally, the increased connectedness between different regions of the world has made it possible for people to come together globally, thereby promoting international cohesiveness.
In conclusion, the benefits of air travel and telecommunications in fostering global unity far outweigh their potential drawbacks. While it is essential to exercise caution in the dissemination of information and transportation of goods, people should embrace these developments fully and take advantage of the opportunities they provide in a modern, globalized world.
Vocabulary Highlights:
- significant growth: a significant increase or expansion
- increased interaction: more frequent or intensified communication and contact
- outweigh the disadvantages/drawbacks: the advantages are greater than the disadvantages/negative aspects
- facilitate the transportation of: make transportation easier or more efficient
- essential supplies: necessary or vital items
- disaster-prone areas: areas that are susceptible to natural disasters
- budget airlines: low-cost airlines
- spread of misinformation: the dissemination of false or misleading information
- immediacy of communication: the speed or swiftness of communication
- sense of global unity: a feeling of togetherness or connectedness among people around the world
- strengthening and uniting individuals: making individuals stronger and bringing them together
- increased connectedness: greater interconnectedness or interdependence
- potential drawbacks: possible negative consequences or disadvantages
- embrace these developments: fully accept and take advantage of these advancements
Grammar Gems:
COMPLEX SENTENCE STRUCTURE – SUBORDINATE CLAUSE
“Despite the immediacy of communication through telecommunications facilitating the spread of misinformation, the benefits of these developments are undeniable.”
The sentence uses a subordinate clause “Despite the immediacy of communication through telecommunications facilitating the spread of misinformation” to introduce a contrasting idea with the main clause “the benefits of these developments are undeniable.” This structure can be helpful for IELTS learners to understand how to present contrasting ideas in a sentence.
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