TASK 1 (Maps): Liverton docks
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Sample Answer
The provided maps detail the transformations taking place in Liverton docks during the recorded period between 1980 and today.
Overall, the docks have undergone considerable changes, generally transforming from a primarily industrial area with commercial boating and storage facilities to an integrated waterfront complex accommodating educational, recreational, and socio-cultural functions. Other notable features are the added pedestrian, flood-defence, and parking facilities to cater to a presumably wider range of visitors and locals.
In the northernmost region, the existing warehouse situated in the northwestern corner has been revamped, being turned into an education centre, to the east of which there is now a newly constructed sailing club, located on the former site of the tower crane. Likewise, the former warehouse in the northeastern part has been replaced with a new children’s playground, while another tower crane at the northeastern corner was dismantled, leaving behind an empty area.
Looking at the central region, a marine museum has been constructed, replacing all commercial ships that used to occupy the central river. To the east of it, a bridge was added, along with a flood-protection feature (a flood barrier) to prevent water from the river from flooding the western museum.
Turning to the southern part, a newly constructed hotel has replaced the southwestern crane, while the warehouse was demolished, giving way to newly developed apartment blocks. A river walk has been added to the north of the hotel and apartments to cater to foot traffic. In the eastern part, a parking facility has been provided, from which people can still navigate eastward towards the coast.
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The provided maps detail the transformations taking place in Liverton docks during the recorded period between 1980 and today.
Overall, the docks have undergone considerable changes, generally transforming from a primarily industrial area with commercial boating and storage facilities to an integrated waterfront complex accommodating educational, recreational, and socio-cultural functions. Other notable features are the added pedestrian, flood-defence, and parking facilities to cater to a presumably wider range of visitors and locals.
In the northernmost region, the existing warehouse situated in the northwestern corner has been revamped, being turned into an education centre, to the east of which there is now a newly constructed sailing club, located on the former site of the tower crane. Likewise, the former warehouse in the northeastern part has been replaced with a new children’s playground, while another tower crane at the northeastern corner was dismantled, leaving behind an empty area.
Looking at the central region, a marine museum has been constructed, replacing all commercial ships that used to occupy the central river. To the east of it, a bridge was added, along with a flood-protection feature (a flood barrier) to prevent water from the river from flooding the western museum.
Turning to the southern part, a newly constructed hotel has replaced the southwestern crane, while the warehouse was demolished, giving way to newly developed apartment blocks. A river walk has been added to the north of the hotel and apartments to cater to foot traffic. In the eastern part, a parking facility has been provided, from which people can still navigate eastward towards the coast.
Vocabulary
- transformations taking place – những thay đổi đang diễn ra
- undergone considerable changes – trải qua nhiều thay đổi đáng kể
- primarily industrial area – khu vực chủ yếu là công nghiệp
- commercial boating and storage facilities – cơ sở cho tàu thuyền thương mại và lưu trữ
- integrated waterfront complex – khu phức hợp ven sông tích hợp
- educational, recreational, and socio-cultural functions – các chức năng giáo dục, giải trí và văn hóa xã hội
- added pedestrian, flood-defence, and parking facilities – thêm cơ sở cho người đi bộ, chống lũ và bãi đỗ xe
- cater to a presumably wider range of visitors and locals – phục vụ cho nhiều du khách và người dân địa phương hơn
- existing warehouse situated in the northwestern corner – nhà kho hiện có nằm ở góc tây bắc
- revamped – tân trang lại / cải tạo lại
- newly constructed sailing club – câu lạc bộ chèo thuyền mới xây
- former site of the tower crane – vị trí cũ của cần cẩu tháp
- replaced with a new children’s playground – được thay bằng sân chơi trẻ em mới
- dismantled – tháo dỡ / dỡ bỏ
- empty area – khu vực trống
- marine museum has been constructed – bảo tàng hàng hải đã được xây dựng
- commercial ships that used to occupy the central river – tàu thương mại từng chiếm khu vực giữa sông
- flood-protection feature (a flood barrier) – công trình chống ngập (đê chắn lũ)
- newly constructed hotel – khách sạn mới xây
- replaced the southwestern crane – thay thế cần cẩu phía tây nam
- demolished – phá dỡ
- newly developed apartment blocks – khu căn hộ mới xây
- river walk has been added – lối đi dọc sông đã được thêm
- cater to foot traffic – phục vụ người đi bộ
- navigate eastward towards the coast – di chuyển về phía đông ra bờ biển
Tóm tắt cấu trúc:
🔹 Overall structure / Cấu trúc tổng thể
1️. Introduction (Mở bài)
→ Paraphrase the question (viết lại đề bài bằng từ đồng nghĩa).
📘 Ví dụ:
The provided maps detail the transformations taking place in Liverton docks during the recorded period between 1980 and today.
➡️ Công thức nhớ: The provided maps illustrate + main area + over the period between A and B.
2️. Overview (Tổng quan)
→ Nêu 2–3 thay đổi nổi bật nhất + xu hướng tổng thể (general trend).
📘 Ví dụ:
Overall, the docks have undergone considerable changes, transforming from a primarily industrial area to an integrated waterfront complex.
➡️ Công thức nhớ:
🔸 Overall, + main subject + have/has undergone + major/significant changes,
🔸 generally transforming from A (past use) to B (current/new function).
🟢 Mẹo nhớ tiếng Việt:
Tổng quan = Từ khu công nghiệp → khu phức hợp hiện đại, nhấn vào quá trình thay đổi lớn nhất + xu hướng chung.
3️. Body 1 (Đoạn 1 – Mô tả khu vực phía Bắc & Trung tâm / The North & Central area)
→ Mô tả các thay đổi lớn đầu tiên (thường là từ trái qua phải, hoặc từ Bắc xuống Nam).
📘 Ví dụ:
- The existing warehouse in the northwestern corner has been revamped and turned into an education centre.
- A marine museum has been constructed in the central region, replacing all commercial ships.
➡️ Công thức nhớ:
🔹 In the (northern/central) part, + feature + has/have been + transformed/replaced/redeveloped into + new feature.
🟢 Từ khóa mô tả thay đổi (describe change):
- revamped / converted / turned into / replaced with / constructed / dismantled / demolished
- Ghi nhớ theo cụm:
🔸 was replaced with → bị thay bằng
🔸 was demolished to make way for → phá để nhường chỗ cho
4️. Body 2 (Đoạn 2 – Mô tả khu vực phía Nam / The Southern area)
→ Tiếp tục mô tả phần còn lại + tiện ích mới.
📘 Ví dụ:
- A newly constructed hotel has replaced the southwestern crane, while the warehouse was demolished to give way to newly developed apartment blocks.
- A river walk and parking facility have been added to cater to foot traffic and visitors.
➡️ Công thức nhớ:
🔹 In the (southern/eastern) area, + new structure + has been built/replaced/added,
🔹 providing facilities for + mục đích (pedestrians / tourists / locals).
🟢 Cách nhóm thông tin (grouping information):
Nhóm theo khu vực (by area): North–Central–South
Hoặc nhóm theo loại thay đổi (by function):
- Industrial → Educational
- Storage → Residential
- Transport → Recreational
🎯 Tổng kết công thức khung nhớ nhanh (Quick Template)
Introduction:
➡️ The maps illustrate changes in [place] between [year] and [year].
Overview:
➡️ Overall, [place] has undergone significant transformations, changing from [old purpose] to [new purpose].
Body 1:
➡️ In the northern/central part, [features] were replaced/converted into [new features].
Body 2:
➡️ In the southern/eastern area, [facilities] were added/built to serve [purpose].
